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Due to sophisticated technology, children do not respect elder people .give reasons and solutions

Due to sophisticated technology, children do not respect elder people. give reasons and solutions 7a66y
It is harsh reality, due to advancement of technology, juvenile has been disobeyed the parents and ocuured multifarious conflicts. I will put shed light on the comprehensive factors and prudent steps to eradicate the problem and I will discuss my viewpoints in the following paragraphs. Analysing the statement and explaining the situation, first and foremost reason behind of this is that hectic schedule of guardians therby they have short span of time to devote with their children's for teaching to soft skills and others which is useful for educator
It is harsh reality, due to advancement of technology, juvenile has
been disobeyed
the parents and
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ocuured
multifarious conflicts. I will put shed light on the comprehensive factors and prudent steps to eradicate the problem and I will discuss my viewpoints in the following paragraphs.
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Analysing
the statement and explaining the situation,
first
and foremost reason behind of this is that hectic schedule of guardians
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therby
they have short span of time to devote with their children's for teaching to soft
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skills
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and others
which is useful for
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educator
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IELTS essay Due to sophisticated technology, children do not respect elder people. give reasons and solutions

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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