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Due to poorer countries experiencing ''brain drain'' they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, leaving to work in more developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with this situation?

Due to poorer countries experiencing ''brain drain'' they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, leaving to work in more developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with this situation? Xryr
In some countries many proffesionals prefer to move to other places to find a better job or salary and it could be a reason to some issues. First of all, it may cause a decrease amount of proffesional workers in poor countries. For instance, scientists. On the other hand, government and nation may stay back the develoment. or government may become backward place. However, population begin to decrease. and it causes for future generation.
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workers in poor countries.
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and nation may stay back the
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.
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or
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government
may become backward place.

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to decrease.
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and
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IELTS essay Due to poorer countries experiencing ''brain drain'' they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, leaving to work in more developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with this situation?

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