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Due to distinct mind sets , people hold different opinions, on the role of the elderly and youth in the development of country while , some countries highly appreciate , other value the youth . In my opinion , both age groups are equally important for social economic development.

Due to distinct mind sets, people hold different opinions, on the role of the elderly and youth in the development of country while, some countries highly appreciate, other value the youth. In my opinion, both age groups are equally important for social economic development. yGNwl
To begin with, older people have aboutdance of knowledge and wisdom as well as they have work experience and moral values. Then youngster always increase their knowledge from there great grand parents lessons. Moreover, elders keep huge number of valuable custmos and traditional thus they can be considered to play a key role in preserving and upholding cultural identity. In addition to, according the culture youngster always given respect to olders because they always listening their opinions and taking their advices. For example, in India youngsters always respect old people by touching their feet but in foreign countries youngsters do not do all this. To commence with, youngster people have more energetic and achievements Willing to make record in the nation as they take further risks. Furthermore, youngster are very effective and innovative because they easily adopt new technology. They have earn money, they always earning hand of their family because youngster take care of family and with this money they fulfill their parents basic needs. As well as, they create economic stability. To summarise up, elders and youngsters are donating their donation to the society. That is why, both are valuable nation's respect and awareness.
To
begin
with, older
people
have
aboutdance
of knowledge and wisdom
as well
as they have work experience and moral values. Then
youngster
always increase their knowledge from there great grand parents lessons.
Moreover
, elders
keep
huge number of valuable
custmos
and traditional
thus
they can
be considered
to play a key role in preserving and upholding cultural identity.
In addition
to, according the culture
youngster
always
given
respect to
olders
because
they always listening
their opinions and taking their advices.
For example
, in India youngsters always respect
old
people
by touching their feet
but
in foreign countries youngsters do not do all this. To commence with,
youngster
people
have more energetic and achievements Willing to
make
record in the nation as they take
further
risks
.
Furthermore
,
youngster
are
very
effective and innovative
because
they
easily
adopt new technology. They have
earn
money,
they always earning
hand of their family
because
youngster
take care of family and with this money they fulfill their parents basic needs.
As well
as, they create economic stability. To
summarise
up, elders and youngsters are donating their donation to the society.
That is
why, both are valuable nation's respect and awareness.
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IELTS essay Due to distinct mind sets, people hold different opinions, on the role of the elderly and youth in the development of country while, some countries highly appreciate, other value the youth. In my opinion, both age groups are equally important for social economic development.

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