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Drug addiction is becoming menace for youth. Decrobe the cause and reasons

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In this contemporary drug addiction becoming a burning statement mostly youngster are involved in this they become nuisance for society parents and education system is responsible for this trend in the following writing I will discuss this season and how we can eradicate this abuse To commence with the prime factor that the parents and Guardians could not interact with their children due to lack of time so they start to follow the trend of drug abuse also some of the youngster opt this in activity from their parents their parents use drug to get rid of stress for instance a diverse women consume drag to relieve the stress but it impact their children they are also opt this and get addicted so parents should not consume drug in front of child so they can't get ideal sometimes we college student and some teenager do that thing for sure even they are from destitute family but they are not aware or an aware about the danger of diction so they must be alerted by their parents and teachers.
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addiction becoming a burning statement
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in this they become nuisance for society
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parents
and education system is responsible for this trend in the following writing I will discuss this season and how we can eradicate this abuse

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and Guardians could not interact with their children due to lack of time
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youngster opt this in activity from their
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parents
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use
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get
rid of
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consume drag to relieve the
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get
addicted
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parents
should not consume
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in front of child
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they can't
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get
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some
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teenager
do that thing for sure even they are from destitute family
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but
they are not aware or an aware about the
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danger
of diction
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so
they
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must
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IELTS essay Drug addiction is becoming menace for youth. Decrobe the cause and reasons

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
178 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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