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The causes of asthma symptoms or attacks

The causes of asthma symptoms or attacks 0E0j3

One of the most common disease to day is asthma. There are four important factors that cause asthma. Firstly, the upper respiratory tract infections often happens because get flu viruses or exposure to cold. Secondly, the emotions of a person in his life can effect for over excitement, laughter and stress. Thirds, the patient of asthma have allergic reaction as result of food or environment factors, such as dust and small particles. Finally because of weather and temperature changes, the body become cold and air become dry. In concltion, there are several symptoms caused asthma disease

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. Thirds, the patient of asthma have allergic reaction as result of food or environment factors, such as dust and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
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 of weather and temperature This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
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