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What are the pros and cons of living with old people?

What are the pros and cons of living with old people? 25gLA
Aging parents move into your home to live with you is also an option. In order to provide their parents with a place to live and keep an eye on them and offer help when needed. Such an option has numerous benefits, but it is also important to note that living with an aging parent also has its weakness. before there are two advantages. Firstly it’s saving money on home and living expenses With your elderly parent living at home with you, they will not need to pay for their own residence and living expenses. secondly, A great benefit of having your elderly parent living at home with you is getting to see them often and getting to spend more quality time together. On the other hand, you need to make additional accommodations and that’s really a problem if u don’t have enough money.
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expenses With your elderly
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at home with you, they will not need to pay for their
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residence and
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, A great benefit of having your elderly
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IELTS essay What are the pros and cons of living with old people?

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