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What are the differences between living in big cities and living in small cities?

What are the differences between living in big cities and living in small cities? rLDdo
that’s is not the same to live in a big city that in a small city, and I think The biggest difference is the benefits you get when you choose to live in a small or large city. First, you have big shopping centers where to find all things you want. Moreover, in a big city, there are a lot of museums, theatres, cinemas or expositions of art, there are many places where to go, that is not available in small cities. on the other hand, in big cities There are many people and so noise, people live in a stuffy and polluted atmosphere. but live in small city ís quite otherwise, life is quiet and calm with fresh air
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IELTS essay What are the differences between living in big cities and living in small cities?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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