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Domestic violence is increasing day by day in the world. What are the causes of and what are the solutions?

Domestic violence is increasing day by day in the world. What are the causes of and what are the solutions? 9L13x
Homeabuse is improving nowadays in the globalise. To begin, in my fundamental accord to my philosophy there are ao many causes of domestic violence. One of them is joblessness. If huaband haa no job and wofe has. Thwrw will be lack of money in the family. Evwry family needs clothes, food, household. If they have two or more children the wife's slary is not enough for family needs. And wife get nervous, when she see her husband and wants to quarrel with him. If huaband does not help her with houseworks indeed he drinks alchahol she gets more nervous. It is not good if they quarrel when children at home. Seeing that they upbring very agressive. If husband and wife both have jobs and they earn enough money for family needs, I think everything will be o'key. Thats why ebery adult should study well and get good job before getting married.
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Homeabuse
is improving nowadays in
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the globalise
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ao
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causes of domestic violence. One of them is joblessness. If
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huaband
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haa
no job and
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wofe
has.
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Thwrw
will be lack of money in the
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family
.
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Evwry
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family
needs clothes, food, household. If they have two or more children the wife's
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slary
is not
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enough
for
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family
needs. And wife
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get
nervous, when she
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see
her husband and wants to quarrel with him.
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If
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huaband
does not
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her with
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houseworks
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he drinks
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she
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more nervous. It is not
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good
if they quarrel when children at home. Seeing that they
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upbring
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very
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agressive
. If husband and wife both have
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jobs and
they earn
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enough
money for
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family
needs, I
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think
everything will be o'key.
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why
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ebery
adult should study well and
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good
job
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before
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IELTS essay Domestic violence is increasing day by day in the world. What are the causes of and what are the solutions?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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