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My first motorcycle accident was when I was 9. That's the reason I don't dare to drive. That day, it was raining so hard and my sister took me to school. Because of the rain, the road was very smooth. Suddenly, a car was thrown toward us and made our motorcycle fall off and landed on my leg. Both of us were terrified. I felt so much pain in my leg that I can't move. With that in mind, the first thing my sister did at that time was to ask if I was injured. I was able to feel the pain then. Thankfully, the other car braked on time. I was later taken to the hospital. My left leg had broken and I needed to take a wheelchair. Until now, I'm still haunted and get nervous whenever I ride on a motorbike. This was an unpleasant experience, but it brought my sister and me closer together. And by that, it makes me respect and highly appreciate family values.
My
first
motorcycle accident was when I was 9. That's the reason I don't dare to drive. That day, it was raining
so
hard
and my sister took me to school.
Because
of the rain, the road was
very
smooth.
Suddenly
, a car
was thrown
toward us and made our motorcycle fall off and landed on my leg. Both of us
were terrified
. I felt
so
much pain in my leg that I can't
move
. With that in mind, the
first
thing my sister did at that time was to ask if I
was injured
. I was able to feel the pain then.
Thankfully
, the other car braked on time. I was later taken to the hospital. My
left
leg had broken and I needed to take a wheelchair. Until
now
, I'm
still
haunted and
get
nervous whenever I ride on a motorbike. This was an unpleasant experience,
but
it brought my sister and me closer together. And by that, it
makes
me respect and
highly
appreciate family values.
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IELTS essay write about your experience

Essay
  American English
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169 words
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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