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Do you think your life do not need the pet or animal?

Do you think your life do not need the pet or animal? 2KqXJ

Animals are an integral part in the Earth and I suppose that there are a large NUMBER of people who prefer to take care a pet. Some people like dogs while others ARE FOND of rabbit, some even like reptiles. But as far as I am concerned, I always love kitties. I got my buddy from my maternal sister after cat mother's pregnancy a few months ago. So I don't know what specie she belongs to, but she is exceptionally an eye-catching and a docile cat that I have ever seen. My companion has a graceful neck and an attractive movement. She does not have the thick furs but it completely takes me some hours a day to clean her hair. The cat is a domesticated creature so it requires a lot of care and my pet is very reliant on me. However, it is not a problem to train her, I told her not to waste any milk and food items and she obeyed. Every time I touch its tail, she expresses a sweet face that heals my mood. Based on such issues, I strongly believe that my companion is a specific breed and it boosts my energy for the new days in my life.

Animals are an integral part in the Earth and I suppose that there are Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large NUMBER of
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people
 who prefer to take care a pet. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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people
 like dogs while others ARE FOND of rabbit, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 even like reptiles. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 as far as I am concerned
, I always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 kitties. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my buddy from my maternal sister after cat mother's pregnancy a few months ago. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I don't know what specie she belongs to, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she is exceptionally
 an eye-catching and a docile cat that I have ever This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
. My companion has a graceful neck and an attractive movement. She does not have the thick furs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it completely takes me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 hours a day to clean her hair. The cat is a domesticated creature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it requires This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 care and my pet is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 reliant on me. However
, it is not a problem to train her, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 her not to waste any milk and food Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).items, and
items and
 she obeyed. Every time I touch its tail, she expresses a sweet face that heals my mood.

Based on such issues, I strongly
 believe that my companion is a specific breed and it boosts my energy for the new days in my life. 