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Do you think you are healthy? Why/Why not?

Do you think you are healthy? Why/Why not? VlMWK
In my point of view, Health is knew about not only physical health but also spiritual health. For physical health, I think myself is good at the moment accompany by a good diet, playing sports and doing exercise regulary. Moreover, To check my health, I usually check periodic health and listen to the doctor’s advice. From that, I can work and study from early to late without any problem. Similarly, my spiritual is the same as my physical heath because of getting out of stress. In my oppinion, Working and stress go hand in hand, I alway find the way to control the stress, my best way is work with a period. Particularly, If I do something in certain time, I will divide it into two periods with a rest time in between. In the rest time, you can listen to the music, watch some relax videos. . . Summarily, I think my health haven’t get any big problem and I will keep this habits continoustly.
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IELTS essay Do you think you are healthy? Why/Why not?

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