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Do you think that students should play computer games or not

Do you think that students should play computer games or not 5Bk3p

Nowadays, many things have been invented to help students relax after a busy and stressful day at school. And the game is one of the most wonderful things to relax. However, students should not spend much time playing computer games because of the following reasons. First of all, playing computer games too much can affect your health, especially your brain. Researchers in Britain have found that, after a period of time playing a violent game, our brain begins to show signs of dysfunction. In addition, playing computer games can lead to obesity because you have to sit in front of a computer for a long time. Second, your study result will be worse if you playing computer too much.

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