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Task 2: Benefits and disadvantages of online shopping

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Task 2: Benefits and disadvantages of online shopping In this day and age, we live in the era of technology, it is becoming increasingly common for people to go online to buy what they need rather than going to traditional markets or supermarkets. Nevertheless, in my viewpoint, there are pros and cons to purchasing something via the internet. When it comes to the merits of electronic shopping. There are several points in its favor. The main one is its convenience. Buyers who want to compare products and prices can get all information on a website in several clicks without having to go from shop to shop. Moreover, it is beneficial for them to make their purchases at any time of day or night and from any part of the world. The other advantage is that the price of product is quite cheaper than that of one bought in conventional shops. There is a wide range of websites supplying price comparing functions. As a result, shoppers can opt for the same goods with the best deal. On the other hand, customers may buy low-quality goods. The reason is that many e-commerce stores hide the bad characters of products. You just take the word of the product description, which is usually cleverly crafted by online stores to make it sound appealing to people. You can not see and feel firsthand or try the size on for your purchase in reality. It is always hard for you to examine the quality of these products. As a result, you might purchase items of poor quality. Additionally, it is no doubt that the problem of internet fraud is unavoidable. It has also been widely criticized for being very insecure. Even with the latest security ware, hackers still manage to find a way to steal your data and copy your credit card details. Online shoppers should first familiarize themselves with online stores and how they protect their data before going on an online shopping spree. In conclusion, everything has two sides so that internet-based shopping is no exception. I strongly believe that although online shopping has some adverse aspects, the advantages outweigh the shortcomings thanks to its positive values, particularly in the covid19 pandemic outbreak. .
Task 2: Benefits and disadvantages of
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online
shopping

In this day and age, we
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live
in the era of technology, it is becoming
increasingly
common for
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people
to go
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online
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
what they need
rather
than going to traditional markets or supermarkets.
Nevertheless
, in my viewpoint, there are pros and cons to purchasing something via the internet.

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When
it
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comes
to the merits of electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
. There are several points in its favor. The main one is its convenience. Buyers who want to compare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
and prices can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
all information on a website in several clicks without having to go from shop to shop.
Moreover
, it is beneficial for them to
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make
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchases
at any time of day or night and from any part of the world. The other advantage is that the price of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
is quite cheaper than that of one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
in conventional shops. There is a wide range of websites supplying price comparing functions.
As a result
, shoppers can opt for the same
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
with the best deal.

On the other hand
, customers may
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buy
low-quality
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goods
. The reason is that
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many
e-commerce stores
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hide
the
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bad
characters of
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products
. You
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just
take the word of the
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product
description, which is
usually
cleverly
crafted by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
stores to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it sound appealing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. You can not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
and feel firsthand or try the size on for your
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purchase
in reality. It is always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
for you to examine the quality of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
As a result
, you might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
items of poor quality.
Additionally
, it is no doubt that the problem of internet fraud is unavoidable. It has
also
been
widely
criticized for being
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very
insecure. Even with the latest security ware, hackers
still
manage to find a way to steal your data and copy your credit card
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details
.
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Online
shoppers should
first
familiarize themselves with
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online
stores and how they protect their data
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before
going on an
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online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
spree.

In conclusion
, everything has two sides
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so
that internet-based
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shopping
is no exception. I
strongly
believe that although
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online
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shopping
has
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some
adverse aspects, the advantages outweigh the shortcomings thanks to its
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
values,
particularly
in the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid19
pandemic outbreak.
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.
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IELTS essay Task 2: Benefits and disadvantages of online shopping

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
370 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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