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Elements/ factors to make a person in general interesting

Elements/ factors to make a person in general interesting 7P0r3
Elements/ factors to make a person in general interesting. First of all, becoming an interesting person has to good communication skill. Interpersonal skills always attract from other’s view and make people see you in another point of view. The second is specialized knowledge. Why does knowledge make a person in general interesting? When you have knowledge, nobody doesn’t. They think you are an interesting person and they can opportunity to approach the new knowledge. That make you special human. And last you ar doing things in a way that’s different from your own. This way but also is bad and not only help you stand out in the crowd of people. And especially, you have your own of looking things. It makes you become interesting. In short, open- mindedness of knowledge, good communication, don’t get along with the crowd which help you better, interesting and make your life much more pleasant and fulfilling for you.
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always attract from other’s view and
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people
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you in another point of view. The second
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knowledge
. Why does
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knowledge
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person
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? When you have
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knowledge
, nobody doesn’t. They
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people
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especially
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own
of looking things. It
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makes
you become
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interesting
. In short, open- mindedness of
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knowledge
,
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good
communication, don’t
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along with the crowd which
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you better,
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your life much more pleasant and fulfilling for you.
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IELTS essay Elements/ factors to make a person in general interesting

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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