Many people claim that criminality has become one of the most crucial issues and there is no effective solution for it. Nowadays, there are numerous types of penalties that are given to each kind of offence and most of them are not able to change the crime rate. However, I strongly believe that if appropriate measures are taken, criminal intentions can be thwarted.
First and foremost, it is an undeniable fact that once the murderers have been released from prison, they still have a tendency to commit a crime. This kind of penalty system does not change moral behaviours of villains. Hence, this means governments should implement more efficient prevention measures such as rehabilitation. Unless the offenders are treated mentally in reclamation centres, there is a high risk that second murder attempt will occur. According to the research made in countries both do and do not have rehabilitation centres for criminals, the crime rate is decreasing in the ones which apply rehabilitation.
Secondly, there are some incentives that induce people to have malevolent intentions, such as robbery, theft and murder. The biggest reasons for these intentions are low living standards, social and economic problems in the country. Crime rates can be reduced if the country itself tries to tackle the problem by increasing the prosperity of people by providing them with better living standards. For instance, Norway, which is recognized as the country in which the happiest people live, has the lowest violation rate in the world.
To conclude, I oppose the statement that nothing can be done to inhibit committing heinous crimes because of the two reasons given above. If the government takes serious actions such as implementing recovery for first-time offenders and increasing the standard of living, the number of crimes may decrease dramatically.
Many
people
claim that criminality has become one of the most crucial issues and there is no effective solution for it. Nowadays, there are numerous types of penalties that are
given
to each kind of
offence
and most of them are not able to
change
the
crime
rate
.
However
, I
strongly
believe that if appropriate measures
are taken
, criminal intentions can
be thwarted
.
First
and foremost, it is an undeniable fact that once the murderers have
been released
from prison, they
still
have a tendency to commit a
crime
. This kind of penalty system does not
change
moral
behaviours
of villains.
Hence
, this means
governments
should implement more efficient prevention measures such as rehabilitation. Unless the offenders
are treated
mentally in reclamation
centres
, there is a high
risk
that second murder attempt will occur. According to the research made in
countries
both do and do not have rehabilitation
centres
for criminals, the
crime
rate
is decreasing in the ones which apply rehabilitation.
Secondly
, there are
some
incentives that induce
people
to have malevolent intentions, such as robbery, theft and murder. The biggest reasons for these intentions are low living standards, social and economic problems in the
country
.
Crime
rates
can be
reduced
if the
country
itself tries to tackle the problem by increasing the prosperity of
people
by providing them with better living standards.
For instance
, Norway, which
is recognized
as the
country
in which the happiest
people
live
, has the lowest violation
rate
in the world.
To conclude
, I oppose the statement that nothing can
be done
to inhibit committing heinous
crimes
because
of the two reasons
given
above. If the
government
takes serious actions such as implementing recovery for
first
-time offenders and increasing the standard of living, the number of
crimes
may decrease
dramatically
.