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Do you think that people's social lives have gotten better or worse than in the past? If you think their social lives have got worse, is this a result of modern forms of communication?

Do you think that people's social lives have gotten better or worse than in the past? If you think their social lives have got worse, is this a result of modern forms of communication? 8J5G5
I am using some modern communication methods. One of them is online messaging and facetime. They help me stay connected with my friends anytime, anywhere, anytime. They make my life more comfortable. Sometimes I think I can't live without these modern methods of communication but it also separates me from my loved ones. So, I still want to meet face-to-face with friends and family rather than through a phone screen.
I am using
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modern communication methods. One of them is online messaging and
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help
me stay connected with my friends anytime, anywhere, anytime. They
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make
my life more comfortable.
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Sometimes
I
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I can't
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live
without these modern methods of communication
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separates me from my
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IELTS essay Do you think that people's social lives have gotten better or worse than in the past? If you think their social lives have got worse, is this a result of modern forms of communication?

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