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Do you think that it is right for rich countries to pollute the environment?

Do you think that it is right for rich countries to pollute the environment? kYW9R

The environmental crisis has arisen at an alarming level since the industrial revolution. Land and water have been contaminated and caused harm to living organisms as well as the environment. Acid rain, green house effect, global warming and ozone depletion are common terms that we have heard and will eventually cause the earth to no longer be a safe place to live in. Rich countries such as The United States and Australia are responsible for seven out of every 10 tons of carbon dioxide emitted since the industrial revolution. Other green house gases such as methane and nitrous oxide also contribute to the heat-trapping condition and result in global warming where the average temperature increases. Green house gases are emitted mainly due to human activities such as burning fossil fuels. Consequently, flooding and drought will happen and people around the world will suffer from their acts. Besides, the soil pollution it is also an undesirable outcome when rich countries deprive people of lands for agricultural purpose. Herbicides and pesticides are used to maximize the production to export their products regardless of the impact towards the environment. The chemical substances will leave the soil acidic, the clearing of forest due to agricultural development will also cause animals to lose natural habitats. In addition, some developed countries have transferred their industries to other rural countries to lower their production costs. It causes pollution in that particular country and they have not taken the responsibility to fix the situation. As a result, the rich consume and the poor suffer the pollution. In conclusion, it is not right for rich countries to pollute the environment in order to achieve economic growth. Actions have to be taken to slower down the impacts towards environment and human.

The environmental crisis has arisen at an alarming level since the industrial

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revolution
. Land and water have been contaminated
 and caused harm to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphliving.living!living?living:living,living;
living


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organisms
as well
 as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. Acid rain, green This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 effect, global Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphwarming.warming!warming?warming:warming,warming;
warming


and ozone depletion are common terms that we have heard and will eventually
 cause

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 earth to no longer be a safe place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in.

Rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 such as The United States and Australia are responsible for

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seven
 out of every 10 tons of carbon dioxide emitted since the industrial revolution.

Other green This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 gases such as methane and nitrous oxide also
 contribute to the

heat-trapping condition and result in global warming where the average temperature

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increases
. Green This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 gases are emitted
mainly
 due to human activities such Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphas.as!as?as:as,as;
as


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBurning
burning
 fossil fuels. Consequently
, flooding and drought will happen and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAround
around
 the world will suffer from their acts.

Besides
, the soil pollution it is also
 an undesirable outcome when rich

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countries
 deprive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of lands for agricultural purpose. Herbicides and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpesticides.pesticides!pesticides?pesticides:pesticides,pesticides;
pesticides


are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to maximize the production to export their products regardless of the

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterImpact
impact
 towards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. The chemical substances will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 the soil acidic,

the clearing of forest due to agricultural development will also
 cause animals to lose

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNatural
natural
 habitats.

In addition
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 have transferred their industries to

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOther
other
 rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 to lower their production costs. It causes pollution in Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterParticular
particular
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).country, and
country and
 they have not taken the responsibility to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the situation. As Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragrapha.a!a?a:a,a;
a


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterResult
result
, the rich consume and the poor suffer the pollution.

In conclusion
, it is not right for rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 to pollute the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 in

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOrder
order
 to achieve economic growth. Actions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be taken
 to slower down Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthe.the!the?the:the,the;
the


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterImpacts
impacts
 towards You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 and human. 