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Do you think that international schools are better than local schools? Why/ Why not?

Do you think that international schools are better than local schools? Why/ Why not? jVmap
From my perspective, I believe that international schools are better choices for students to choose. Mingling with fellow foreign students is the first reason. You know, when learning in a multicultural environment, they will have a chance to be exposed to new languages, new cultures and form lasting friendships. For example, a Vietnamese boy could learn a little bit of Chinese because of having a Chinese friend in his class. On top of that, international schools will provide students with numerous extracurricular activities. Through this, they can learn more about some soft skills such as cooperation skills, problem-solving skills.
From my perspective, I believe that international schools are better choices for students to choose. Mingling with fellow foreign students is the
first
reason. You know, when learning in a multicultural environment, they will have a chance to
be exposed
to new languages, new cultures and form lasting friendships.
For example
, a Vietnamese boy could learn a
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of Chinese
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of having a Chinese friend in his
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On top of that
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some
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IELTS essay Do you think that international schools are better than local schools? Why/ Why not?

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