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The plans illustrates the present layout of the Southwaest Airport and how the layout will be in the next year after a redevelopment.

The plans illustrates the present layout of the Southwaest Airport and how the layout will be in the next year after a redevelopment. Klrm1
The plans illustrates the present layout of the Southwaest Airport and how the layout will be in the next year after a redevelopment. Overall, from the comparison of the two layouts, it is evident that the future layout will stretch over more land area to accomodate additional gates and it will also have some new features, such as shops, ATM, car hire, bag drop, and sky train. In the present layout, the airport has only a few (4) features- a caheck-in and café at the two sides of the departures which is situated at the left side of the structure, eight gates for passengers at the back of the airport with a walkway on the left. Departures and arrivals are at two separate compound and they are separated from the gates by security and passport control. In terms of the predicted layout, the front of the building will stay the same. However, the number of entrance will be doubled for each room. Both the departure and arrival will have separate cafes. Moreover, the departure will get a bag drop feature, while the check-in feature will shift its position to the right. An ATM and a car hire will be added to the arrival space. There will be three major changes at the back of the building. firstly, the number of gates will increase to 18 in a ‘Y’ shaped layout with a walkway in the middle. Finally, in the transitional space between the gates and the front of the building, some shops will be accommodated.
The plans
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the present
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layout
of the
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Southwaest
Airport and how the
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layout
will be in the
next
year after a redevelopment.

Overall
, from the comparison of the two
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layouts
, it is evident that the future
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layout
will stretch over more land area to
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accomodate
additional
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gates
and it will
also
have
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some
new features, such as shops, ATM, car hire, bag drop, and sky train.

In the present
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layout
, the airport has
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only
a few (4) features- a
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caheck-in
and café at the two sides of the
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departures
which
is situated
at the
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left
side of the structure, eight
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gates
for passengers at the back of the airport with a walkway on the
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left
.
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Departures
and arrivals are at two separate
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compound and
they
are separated
from the
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gates
by security and passport control.

In terms of the predicted
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layout
, the front of the building will stay the same.
However
, the number of entrance will
be doubled
for each room. Both the
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departure
and arrival will have separate
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cafes
.
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, the
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departure
will
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get
a bag drop
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feature
, while the
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check
-in
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feature
will shift its position to the right. An ATM and a car hire will be
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added
to the arrival space. There will be three major
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changes
at the back of the building.
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firstly
, the number of
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gates
will increase to 18 in a ‘Y’ shaped
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layout
with a walkway in the middle.
Finally
, in the transitional space between the
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gates
and the front of the building,
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some
shops will
be accommodated
.
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IELTS essay The plans illustrates the present layout of the Southwaest Airport and how the layout will be in the next year after a redevelopment.

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255 words
5.5
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