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Do you think that children's mind gets sharper when they build legos.

Do you think that children's mind gets sharper when they build legos. 86oBx

Yes, I think that children's mind gets sharper when they build legos, so one day I was building some legos and it was not correct according to the instructions, so I broke it into pieces and built it again and then it was correct. In the 4th part I was building an animal and it broke so I had to brake it into pieces and I was not able to build it again, but I think that my mind got sharper from building legos, plus it is also very fun, I recommend this fun activity to everyone.

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think
 that children's mind This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 sharper when they build Possible spelling mistake found.LegoslegslogosLagosLegoegos
legos
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 one day I was building This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.LegoslegslogosLagosLegoegos
legos
 and it was not correct according to the instructions, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I broke it into pieces and built it again and then it was correct. In the 4th part I was building an animal and it broke This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I had to brake it into Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).pieces, and
pieces and
 I was not able to build it again, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that my mind This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 sharper from building Possible spelling mistake found.LegoslegslogosLagosLegoegos
legos
, plus it is also
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very
 fun, I recommend this fun activity to everyone. 