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Do you think television channels have a negative impact on the culture of nations?

Do you think television channels have a negative impact on the culture of nations? kjdgd
Cutting-edge, diffrent kind of source for entertainment like, T. V, Social media and Other's. Television progrums not have to Influence on our culture, as well as, better impact on mind. This is discuss both views and give my opinion. To begin with, television is much nice machine for knew about News, other channels like discovery BBC news. To add, a think is known by television. In other words, if aged masses. Utilize for entertwinmont. However; Student realized borring then watch movie and some seriall; this reason. they feel better and in liesure time Saw the discovery chummel then they intake a knowledge about livestock's and animals. For epitome, some school give a project for helppning on world. That's reason to they are not only completet his project but also take knowledge over this. As a result, if & pupil are 6 under take this kind of work then. . mushrooming is ability on Study. Secondly, it's acapaling for new generation. channels is being shown by them. like history of ancestors and other kind of Althought, every Coin's have to side's merits or demerit's. More-over, we child watch Television day in and day out, then bad effect on is mind that reason to create a timetable for wacking to V. Furthermore influence on his eyes, and damage. As a result, a student is being don't focus on his study then spoil life by television. Apart from that don't choice about his farth comming future To conclude, according to me, utelize is Being on perfect direction by student's. That's much better source for life. As well as, teuch verious kind of think
Cutting-edge,
diffrent
kind
of source for entertainment like, T. V, Social media and Other's.
Television
progrums
not
have to
Influence on our culture,
as well
as, better impact on mind. This is
discuss
both views and give my opinion.

To
begin
with,
television
is much nice machine for knew about News, other channels like discovery BBC news. To
add
, a
think
is known
by
television
.
In other words
, if aged masses. Utilize for
entertwinmont
.
However
; Student realized
borring
then
watch
movie and
some
seriall
; this reason.
they
feel better and in
liesure
time
Saw
the discovery
chummel
then they intake a knowledge about livestock's and animals. For epitome,
some
school
give a project for
helppning
on world. That's reason to they are not
only
completet his
project
but
also
take knowledge over this.
As a result
, if & pupil are 6
under take
this
kind
of work then.
.
mushrooming
is ability on Study.

Secondly
, it's
acapaling
for new generation.
channels
is
being shown
by them.
like
history of ancestors and other
kind
of
Althought
, every Coin's
have to
side's merits or demerit's. More-over,
we child
watch
Television
day in and day out, then
bad
effect on is mind that reason to create a timetable for
wacking
to V.
Furthermore
influence on his eyes, and damage.
As a result
, a student is being don't focus on his study then spoil life by
television
. Apart from that don't choice about his
farth
comming
future


To conclude
, according to me,
utelize
is Being on perfect direction by student's.

That's much better source for life.
As well
as,
teuch
verious
kind
of
think
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IELTS essay Do you think television channels have a negative impact on the culture of nations?

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