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do you think school should use more technology to help children learn?

do you think school should use more technology to help children learn? GwgJ2

computers do offer immense benefits and they may help teachers a lot in the curriculum but I think schools should not use more technology to teach. Technology indeed brings convenience and this makes humans more and more dependent on it but there are things that gadgets can not do or even too much. I’m currently a high school student so I know that the amount of technology equipment at school is perfectly fine, there is no need to add more. Not to mention that it will harm the child's physical health since they have to interact too much with electronic devices, not only at school. moreover, not all teachers are tech-savvy and they never wanted to be embarrassed in front of the students who are more versatile in using technology than them

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