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Do you think people rely too much on technology today?

Do you think people rely too much on technology today? Kn7k3
As for me, now, people perhaps depend too much or too believe on technology. Some people ignore protecting warms. For example, there are kinds of smart cars, which producers make sure of protection for you if accidents happen, so people easily believe them. Actually, it is not avoided accidents in which, a part of is the error of cars but the bigger reason due to awareness of people. Some drink and drive and some others do not wear a seat belt.
As for me,
now
,
people
perhaps depend too much or
too believe
on technology.
Some
people
ignore
protecting warms.
For example
, there are kinds of smart cars, which producers
make
sure of protection for you if accidents happen,
so
people
easily
believe them. Actually, it is not avoided accidents in which, a part of is the error of cars
but
the bigger reason due to awareness of
people
.
Some
drink and drive and
some
others do not wear a seat belt.
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IELTS essay Do you think people rely too much on technology today?

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