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do you think parents should be held responsible

do you think parents should be held responsible qQrRw

Absolutely. I believe families living off state benefits should lose them if their children get expelled or suspended. Suspended from school is suspended from benefits. Other families should pay a fine. Parents of bullies should be fined too. This has to be treated sensitively though because sometimes the child has a behaviour aberration that was not the fault of the parents - so really, a case by case basis

Absolutely
. I believe families living off state benefits should lose them if their children This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 expelled or suspended. Suspended from school is suspended
 from benefits. Other families should pay a fine. Parents of bullies should be fined
 too. This This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be treated
sensitively
 though This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 the child has a Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 aberration that was not the fault of the parents Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
really
, a case by case Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphbasis.basis!basis?basis:basis,basis;
basis