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Do you think it is possible to be friends with someone if you never meet them in person? Is this real friendship? What kind of influence can friends have on our lives? How important would you say it is to have friends from different cultures? v.1

Do you think it is possible to be friends with someone if you never meet them in person? Is this real friendship? What kind of influence can friends have on our lives? How important would you say it is to have friends from different cultures? v. 1
The invade of digital technology has changed the modern-era. From transferring data globally to getting massive data within one click. This essay will discuss few issues like data breach, misuse of information and will also suggest to overcome them. The fact of the matter is that the majority of people have taken advantage of this new technology. Digital banking, sending money world-wide, learning new technologies online and online shopping all this is easy because of an internet. While, digital website brought all these benefits, but it also brought a lot of problems to human. Nowadays, There are many online banking frauds, misuse of data like bank account details and personal information. To Illustrate my point, a studied shown that the online fraud has increased drastically in last 5 years' as people started using more cyberspace for money transfer. Small cases like random calls are coming to the elderly people who are less educated, for sharing their OTP and passwords for their credits card and debit card transfer. Although, There are many disadvantages using internet as personal data is compromised, the government and technical society came up with lots of online security. One should always use authorized anti-virus on their phones and laptop to protect data breach. Use Authenticated websites and online services to send money globally and do online shopping. Also, Make sure you do not share your personal information like OTP and password with anyone. For an example, In a country like India, where people are less educated to handle such kind of frauds, government has started the campaigns "how to use website sites safely". Awareness among people by giving ads on Radio and TV, not share your passwords and OTP with anyone. In conclusion, "Internet is vital for us to grow". But it is necessary to make sure we use protected sites and work on our own devices to make any online transactions. Perhaps, good things bring negative impact also.
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of digital technology has
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changed
the modern-era. From transferring
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data
globally to getting massive
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data
within one click. This essay will discuss few issues like
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data
breach, misuse of information and will
also
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suggest to overcome
them.

The fact of the matter is that the majority of
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people
have taken advantage of this new technology. Digital banking, sending money world-wide, learning new technologies
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online
and
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online
shopping all this is easy
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because
of an internet. While, digital website brought all these benefits,
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but
it
also
brought
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a lot of
problems to human. Nowadays, There are
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many
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online
banking frauds, misuse of
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data
like bank account
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details
and personal information. To Illustrate my point, a studied shown that the
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online
fraud has increased
drastically
in last 5 years' as
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people
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started
using more cyberspace for money transfer.
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Small
cases like random calls are coming to the elderly
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people
who are less educated, for sharing their OTP and passwords for their credits card and debit card transfer.

Although, There are
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many
disadvantages using internet as personal
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data
is compromised
, the
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government
and technical society came up with lots of
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online
security. One should always
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use
authorized anti-virus on their phones and laptop to protect
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data
breach.
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Use
Authenticated websites and
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online
services to
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send
money globally and do
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online
shopping.
Also
,
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Make
sure you do not share your personal information like OTP and password with anyone. For an example, In a country like India, where
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people
are less educated to handle such kind of frauds,
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government
has
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started
the campaigns
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how to
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use
website sites
safely
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. Awareness among
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people
by giving ads on Radio and TV, not share your passwords and OTP with anyone.

In conclusion
,
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Internet is vital for us to grow
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.
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But
it is necessary to
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make
sure we
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use
protected sites and work on our
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own
devices to
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make
any
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online
transactions. Perhaps,
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good
things bring
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negative
impact
also
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IELTS essay Do you think it is possible to be friends with someone if you never meet them in person? Is this real friendship? What kind of influence can friends have on our lives? How important would you say it is to have friends from different cultures? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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