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Do you think it has a positive or negative impact on you if you buy a home close to the work place?

Do you think it has a positive or negative impact on you if you buy a home close to the work place? GNnwj
The importance of buy things which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. It can be strongly agreed the fact of this matter has some convincing agruments, despite the contention about it. In this essay, I will elaborate my pointy of view on the given notion in the forthcoming paragraphs before drawing a reasonable conclusion. On the one side, there are number negative impacts if we will buy a house close to home. firstly, the pollution which is the major problem of these days. Due to the pollution their several diseases are obtain which is very harmful for our health. for example, In many developing countries people always avoid to buy home near the industrial area because of pollution and diseases. Therefore, the effect of the pollution should not be ignored. On the other side, there are several benefits of buy home close to work place. Some people who earns low income and they always prefer to live near the work place due the shortage of income. Another reason, some people who lives very far from the work. they like to live near the work because they want to save their time as well as they can get good time for rest. For Instance, many researchers conduct that people like to live near the work place for save their time and cost. For this resaon, the imporatnce of the time and cost is undeniable. After analysing the above discussion, it can be concluded that increaseing pollution is the major pheonema of this statement and save time and cost is significant.
The importance of
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things which was always debatable, has
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the fact of this matter has
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convincing
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notion in the forthcoming paragraphs
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drawing a reasonable conclusion.

On the one side, there are number
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impacts if we will
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close to home.
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firstly
, the
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which is the major problem of these days. Due to the
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pollution
their several diseases are
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which is
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harmful for our health.
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developing countries
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people
always avoid to
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home
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near
the industrial area
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and diseases.
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should not be
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On the other side, there are several benefits of
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home close to
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income and
they always prefer to
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near
the
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place due the shortage of income. Another reason,
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far from the
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they
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near
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as well
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For Instance
,
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researchers conduct that
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like to
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live
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near
the
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work
place for save their
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time
and cost. For this
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resaon
, the
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imporatnce
of the
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and cost is undeniable.

After
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the above discussion, it can
be concluded
that
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increaseing
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pollution
is the major
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pheonema
of this statement and save
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time
and cost is significant.
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IELTS essay Do you think it has a positive or negative impact on you if you buy a home close to the work place?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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