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waste. other people believe that children should be taught this at home. discuss both the views and give your own opinion

waste. other people believe that children should be taught this at home. discuss both the views and give your own opinion eelKK
A number of people believe that school is the best medium of teaching children about recycling, on the contra few believe that recycling should be taught to children at home. I think both are equally responsible for educating children about how to recycle waste. As children spend their most of the time with parents, they are responsible to aware them about recycling. Minors learn from adults. Before sending them to school parents are responsible for teaching how to recycle waste materials. By doing so, children can save resources in nearby future. for example, underutilized newspaper can be used to make several things. One can recycle numerous such things like plastic, metal, wood, glass etc. at home. The others are in view that school is the best medium for kid to teach reusing of waste. school should conduct several programmers or organised workshops to make children learn how to recycle. for example, competitions can be held at school like 'Best out of Waste' in which they can acquire more knowledge and increase their creativity. I believe that both school as well as home are responsible to educate children about recycling. When minors are in school teachers are reliable for teaching and when minors are at home, parents are responsible for education them. Thus, in my opinion both are equally prudent to aware children how to make best out of waste. In the end, I would emphasis on using optimum resources. Resources are limited but demand is unlimited. If resources are extracted more then regeneration it can led to environmental crises. So, start saving resources by making best out of waste. Parents and teachers should take children towards the goal of sustainable development. Hence, the true purpose of recycling is said to be served.
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about how to
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recycle
waste.

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spend their most of the time with
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parents
, they are
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responsible
to aware them about
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recycling
. Minors learn from adults.
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sending them to
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school
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parents
are
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responsible
for teaching how to
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recycle
waste materials. By doing
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,
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children
can save resources in nearby future.
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several things. One can
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numerous such things like plastic, metal, wood, glass etc. at home.

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school
is the
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best
medium for kid to teach reusing of waste.
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school
should conduct several programmers or
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workshops to
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children
learn how to
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.
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for
example, competitions can
be held
at
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school
like 'Best out of Waste' in which they can acquire more knowledge and increase their creativity.

I believe that both
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school
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home are
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responsible
to educate
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children
about
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recycling
. When minors are in
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school
teachers are reliable for teaching and when minors are at home,
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parents
are
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for education them.
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children
how to
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make
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best
out of waste.

In the
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emphasis
on using optimum resources. Resources
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demand
is unlimited
. If resources
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regeneration it can
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to environmental crises.
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,
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saving resources by making
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best
out of waste.
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Parents
and teachers should take
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children
towards the goal of sustainable development.
Hence
, the true purpose of
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recycling
is said
to
be served
.
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IELTS essay waste. other people believe that children should be taught this at home. discuss both the views and give your own opinion

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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