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Writing poems is it good or bad

Writing poems is it good or bad 7WGKn
My independent country My homeland, if you go, i am happy, My love and affection are a gift to you. I am sick if i dont see you This heart beats for you every moment. All the buildings that rise in you, You are the great fortress of dreams. You have great children, You will be their happiest mother. Uzbek does not bend, does not bend, He stands proudly, holding his head upright. If i give upthis paradise The bread and salt you give will hit you. We have been blessed with this beautiful country, Studying in an elevated "conscious" school. It is an honor for me to be a teacher, Reading words as precious as gold. We were no less, we will never be less, May my homeland be more beautiful. Again and again, when we say, 30 years of independence, congratulations! ! ! ! 9th grade student Egamberganova Gulhayo Jasurbek qizi.
My independent country

My homeland, if you go,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am happy,

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and affection are a gift to you.

I am sick if i
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dont
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you

This heart beats for you every moment.

All the buildings that rise in you,

You are the great fortress of dreams.

You have great children,

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
will be their happiest mother.

Uzbek does not bend, does not bend,

He stands
proudly
, holding his head upright.

If
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
give
Possible spelling mistake found.
upthis
paradise

The bread and salt you give will hit you.

We have
been blessed
with this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
country,

Studying in an elevated
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
conscious
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
school.

It is an honor for me to be a teacher,

Reading words as precious as gold.

We were no less, we will never be less,

May my homeland be more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
.

Again and again, when we say,

30 years of independence, congratulations! ! ! !

9th grade student

Possible spelling mistake found.
Egamberganova
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Gulhayo
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Jasurbek
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qizi
.
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IELTS essay Writing poems is it good or bad

Essay
  American English
20 paragraphs
153 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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