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Do you think children should be taught at home or they should be sent to a school to pursue formal education. Give your opinion with reasons.

Do you think children should be taught at home or they should be sent to a school to pursue formal education. Give your opinion with reasons. DNQWE
The initial thoughts that come to our mind when we talk of education are the classrooms, teachers, students etc. We cannot deny the fact that schools play an important role in building our future. In my opinion, this school based education system cannot be replaced by a home based learning. In this essay, we will explore the benefits school based education has to offer. It is often noticed that working parents find it difficult to devote ample time from their busy routine towards the studies of their children. For example, a student with both the parents working will have to wait for them to reach home and be free to teach, whereas the hours spend in the classroom is fully utilized for knowledge development and the parents are just required to focus on the home work part. Another advantage that classroom teaching provides is the suitable ambience for learning. Several studies have proved that a learner is more disciplined and attentive in a classroom as compared to home. They also develop their social skills when they are with their classmates. For example, a student may find it difficult to study alone but the same student may find it easy when learning through group study. There is a lot of distraction when you study at home whereas in schools you are made to focus on your studies and are constantly looked upon by the educators. To conclude with, studying from home may be comfortable from the students aspect, however, in my opinion, one needs to at least get a formal education by attending schools since children are like wet clay which can be molded perfectly only in the hands of teachers and schools acts as a base for it.
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come
to our mind when we talk of
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education
are the classrooms, teachers,
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students
etc. We cannot deny the fact that
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schools
play an
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important
role in building our future. In my opinion, this
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school
based
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education
system cannot
be replaced
by a home based learning. In this essay, we will explore the benefits
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based
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has to
offer.

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often
noticed that working parents find it difficult to devote ample time from their busy routine towards the
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studies
of their children.
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, a
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student
with both the parents working will
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have to
wait for them to reach home and be free to teach, whereas the hours spend in the classroom is
fully
utilized for knowledge development and the parents are
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required to focus on the home work part.

Another advantage that classroom teaching provides is the suitable ambience for learning. Several
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studies
have proved that a learner is more disciplined and attentive in a classroom as compared to home. They
also
develop their social
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skills
when they are with their classmates.
For example
, a
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student
may find it difficult to
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study
alone
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student
may find it easy when learning through group
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. There is
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a lot of
distraction when you
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at home whereas in
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schools
you
are made
to focus on your
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studies
and are
constantly
looked upon by the educators.

To conclude
with, studying from home may be comfortable from the
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aspect,
however
, in my opinion, one needs to at least
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by attending
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since children are like wet clay which can
be molded
perfectly
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only
in the hands of teachers and
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schools
acts as a base for it.
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IELTS essay Do you think children should be taught at home or they should be sent to a school to pursue formal education. Give your opinion with reasons.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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