It is undoubtedly true that freedom of choice is an imperative thing for the psychological well being of a society. Some peole argue that children should strictly follow the rules set by their parents. However, I firmly believe that children should be given liberty so that they can make their own preferences and explore the world.
First and foremost, children should be given freedom in making decisions for themselves. It will improve their decision making skills as well as transform them into confident mature adults. Moreover, the habit of choosing one particular option among several others, will not them perplexed and double minded while dealing with a plethora of choices in adult life. The jury members of the Supreme court of Japan, for instance, in their interviews attributed their descion making skills to their childhood experiences. They further told that they were never pressed by their parents and always followed their own dreams.
Secondly, children learn best by exploring things and experimentations. Therefore restrictions will hinder their skills and abilities. They would never be able to know their potential unless given liberty. Furthermore, adventurous and curious nature of a child, always provokes him to try new things as well as provides him a better understanding of world. The musicians of Hollywood renowned for their creativity, for example, interviewed and described that they explored their talents by following their personal choices and studied music instead of sciences. Now they are working passionately and enjoying it.
In conclusion, I opine that parents should not be a hurdle for their children to pursue their dreams, instead they should accept children's preferences and guide them accordingly.
It is
undoubtedly
true that freedom of choice is an imperative thing for the psychological
well being
of a society.
Some
peole
argue that
children
should
strictly
follow the
rules
set by their parents.
However
, I
firmly
believe that
children
should be
given
liberty
so
that they can
make
their
own
preferences and explore the world.
First
and foremost,
children
should be
given
freedom in making decisions for themselves. It will
improve
their
decision making
skills
as well
as transform them into confident mature adults.
Moreover
, the habit of choosing one particular option among several others,
will not them
perplexed and double minded while dealing with a plethora of choices in adult life. The jury members of the Supreme court of Japan,
for instance
, in their interviews attributed their
descion
making
skills
to their childhood experiences. They
further
told
that they were never pressed by their parents and always followed their
own
dreams.
Secondly
,
children
learn best by exploring things and
experimentations
.
Therefore
restrictions will hinder their
skills
and abilities. They would never be able to know their potential unless
given
liberty.
Furthermore
, adventurous and curious nature of a child, always provokes him to try new things
as well
as provides him a better understanding of world. The musicians of Hollywood renowned for their creativity,
for example
, interviewed and
described
that they explored their talents by following their personal choices and studied music
instead
of sciences.
Now
they are working
passionately
and enjoying it.
In conclusion
, I opine that parents should not be a hurdle for their
children
to pursue their dreams,
instead
they should accept children's preferences and guide them
accordingly
.
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