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Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?

Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes? 0p8En
Nuclear technology has been one of the hottest inventions during the 20th century. However, there have been heated debates about whether this technology should be used at all, even for the very constructive purposes such as power generation. The reasons why we need nuclear applications are very dear. First, our society is quickly running out of energy supply, and statistics even show a shortage of traditional fuel within 50 years. Besides the poor supply of energy, we are also facing pollution challenges. The CO2 generated in the past century has been roughly equal to the total amount of Carbon dioxide released in the entire history before. In short, we do not have enough energy to use, and can no longer afford to use it in the old way. Nuclear technology is a much more available and cleaner solution to our possible energy and environmental crisis. At the current level of technology, the discovered nuclear supply will be enough to sustain the earth for more than a century. Its generation, if properly operated, produces nothing other than heat, so it is considered super clean. However, I fully understand the concerns of nuclear opponents. First of all nuclear facilities will require strong capabilities to be operated safely. When the operators are not experienced enough, devastating accidents can be created. These have been seen in the former USSR and as well as in Japan. It takes time and resources to acquire such capabilities and not every country can afford it. The other issue with nuclear technology is that it can be easily modified into weapons, which can cost many lives when deployed. Given the challenges we are facing, it is very necessary to promote nuclear technology. However, this must be carried out very carefully, under strict regulations and supervision by the entire human society.
Nuclear
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technology
has been one of the hottest inventions during the 20th century.
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been heated
debates about whether this
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technology
should be
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used
at all, even for the
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very
constructive purposes such as power generation.

The reasons why we need nuclear applications are
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very
dear.
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, our society is
quickly
running out of
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energy
supply, and statistics even
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show
a shortage of traditional fuel within 50 years.
Besides
the poor supply of
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energy
, we are
also
facing pollution challenges. The CO2 generated in the past century has been roughly equal to the total amount of Carbon dioxide released in the entire history
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before
. In short, we do not have
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enough
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energy
to
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use
, and can no longer afford to
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use
it in the
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old
way.

Nuclear
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technology
is a much more available and cleaner solution to our possible
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energy
and environmental crisis. At the
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current
level of
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technology
, the discovered nuclear supply will be
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enough
to sustain the earth for more than a century. Its generation, if
properly
operated, produces nothing other than heat,
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so
it
is considered
The extreme adjective for clean is "spotless".
super clean
.
However
, I
fully
understand the concerns of nuclear opponents.

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First of all
nuclear facilities will require strong capabilities to
be operated
safely
. When the operators are not experienced
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enough
, devastating accidents can
be created
. These have been
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seen
in the former USSR and
as well
as in Japan. It takes time and resources to acquire such capabilities and not every country can afford it. The other issue with nuclear
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technology
is that it can be
easily
modified into weapons, which can cost
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many
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lives
when deployed.

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Given
the challenges we are facing, it is
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very
necessary to promote nuclear
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technology
.
However
, this
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must
be carried
out
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very
carefully
, under strict regulations and supervision by the entire human society.
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IELTS essay Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
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