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What Is Fear? How fear works?

What Is Fear? How fear works? 2lwRx
Fear is a feeling that many people have, but makes us uncomfortable and panic. In fact, it starts in our minds and affects our behavior. But when it comes to in our daily life many people cannot face their fear. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to having fear. II PROS On one hand, The fear changes a person’s behavior for the better. Next, It makes a person know mistakes and avoid them. Furthermore, It makes a person more aware and powerful III CONS On the other hand, The fear avoid communicate. Also, can’t talking with other people. Some fears make us, lazy person and like to live alone. Besides, most fears are extremely tough to conquer. In conclusion, we must overcome all the things that make us uncomfortable and afraid in our lives so that we can progress and develop for the better in life.
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people
have,
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makes
us uncomfortable and panic. In fact, it
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starts
in our minds and affects our behavior.
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to in our daily life
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many
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people
cannot face their
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fear
. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to having fear.

II PROS

On one hand, The
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fear
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changes
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person’s
behavior for the better.

Next
, It
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makes
a
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person
know mistakes and avoid them.

Furthermore
, It
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makes
a
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person
more aware and powerful

III CONS

On the other hand
, The
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fear
avoid communicate.

Also
, can’t
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talking
with other
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people
.

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Some
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fears
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make
us, lazy
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person
and like to
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live
alone.

Besides
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fears
are
extremely
tough to conquer.

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, we
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overcome all the things that
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make
us uncomfortable and afraid in our
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that we can progress and develop for the better in life.
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IELTS essay What Is Fear? How fear works?

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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