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vaccine of covid-19 BANGLADESH

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I would like to talk about the vaccination issue, I am currently living in capital of Dhaka city but our city condition has been dramatically increasing patient of COVID -19. Although, already have given our government the vaccine, but some people are claim about to the vaccination issue. And why people claimed, I think maybe it dose not works properly. Also people are suspicious to vaccination specially rural villagers with city people.
I would like to talk about the vaccination issue, I am
currently
living in capital of Dhaka city
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but
our city condition has been
dramatically
increasing patient of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID
-19. Although, already have
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given
our
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government
the vaccine,
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but
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some
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people
are claim about to the vaccination issue. And why
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people
claimed, I
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think
maybe it
Did you mean "doses"?
dose
not works
properly
.
Also
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people
are suspicious to vaccination
specially
rural villagers with city
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people
.
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IELTS essay vaccine of covid-19 BANGLADESH

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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