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Do you prefer work alone or in agroup

Do you prefer work alone or in agroup B7aBd
It is undeniable fact today modern working condition is getting diversity that demands to work cooperatively sometimes solitarily. Some people are willing to work in a team whereas others take opposing view and prefer to complete their work independently. Let us to discuss some aspects of arguments in the following. First of hand, there are some benefits in working autonomously rather than depending on a group. Firstly, one can choose the task which appropriate their manner that support to manage time and to select the way. As a result, independent working style is improved. Secondly, in this working styles a person enjoys freedom and also responsible for every single aspects of the work. Lastly, stuff is always ready to prove the view on the project without any hesitation. If he gets success, get attention among the colleagues and promoted by the chief alone. On the other hand, most of the work activities require team effort and so even employers prefer the stuffs to work in a team due to believing cooperative work as a success mantra. In company work volume of the task is distributed according to the ability of the members that makes to cut workload and as well as time consuming. Another benefit is that a collective work makes a chance weak performers to get knowledge and motivation from strength individuals and escalate their social skills like referring the point of view by discussing on the project. And lastly, the quality of the task will be efficient, if any project is accomplished by the member of a company, because, each one tries to do best their task. To conclude, however both two ways are always primary, working in a company persuaded me to be more efficient with coordination, motivation, and improvement of the social skill.
It is undeniable fact
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today
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working
condition is getting diversity that demands to
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work
cooperatively
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sometimes
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solitarily
.
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people
are willing to
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work
in a team whereas others take opposing view and prefer to complete their
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work
independently
.
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Let
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some
aspects of arguments in the following.

First
of hand, there are
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some
benefits in
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working
autonomously
rather
than depending on a group.
Firstly
, one can choose the task which appropriate their manner that support to manage time and to select the way.
As a result
, independent
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working
style is
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improved
.
Secondly
, in this
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working
styles a person enjoys freedom and
also
responsible for every single aspects of the
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work
.
Lastly
, stuff is always ready to prove the view on the project without any hesitation. If he
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gets
success,
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get
attention among the colleagues and promoted by the chief alone.

On the other hand
, most of the
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work
activities require team effort and
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so
even employers prefer the stuffs to
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work
in a team due to believing cooperative
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work
as a success mantra. In
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company
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work
volume of the task
is distributed
according to the ability of the members that
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makes
to
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cut
workload and
as well
as
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time consuming
. Another benefit is that a collective
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work
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makes
a chance weak
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performers
to
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get
knowledge and motivation from strength individuals and escalate their social
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skills
like referring the point of view by discussing on the project. And
lastly
, the quality of the task will be efficient, if any project
is accomplished
by the member of a
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company
,
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because
, each one tries to do best their task.

To conclude
,
however
both two ways are always primary,
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working
in a
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company
persuaded me to be more efficient with coordination, motivation, and improvement of the social
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skill
.
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IELTS essay Do you prefer work alone or in agroup

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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