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Do you prefer to be taught by experienced teachers or new teachers?

Do you prefer to be taught by experienced teachers or new teachers? LLnaV
I prefer to learn my lessons from experienced teachers. Experienced teachers Know all aspects of their area of teaching and can answer most questions. On the other hand, they have tried a lot of teaching techniques and have chosen the best one. Due to those facts, I prefer to be taught by experienced teachers. In my opinion, material that we used previously should throw away. If you collect everything, they will be a perfect place for dirt and growing microbes. On the other hand, remaining aged things can messy our surroundings, harming our arrangement and, consequently, our focus. So, I think it's better to remove old tools instead of storing them.
I prefer to learn my lessons from experienced teachers.

Experienced teachers Know all aspects of their area of teaching and can answer most questions.

On the other hand
, they have tried
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
teaching techniques and have chosen the best one.

Due to those facts, I prefer to
be taught
by experienced teachers.

In my opinion, material that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
previously should throw away.

If you collect everything, they will be a perfect place for dirt and growing microbes.

On the other hand
, remaining aged things can messy our surroundings, harming our arrangement and,
consequently
, our focus.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it's better to remove
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
tools
instead
of storing them.
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IELTS essay Do you prefer to be taught by experienced teachers or new teachers?

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8 paragraphs
111 words
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