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Do you prefer to be a leading or supporting member in a group project? Give specific reasons and details in your answer. v.1

Do you prefer to be a leading or supporting member in a group project? Give specific reasons and details in your answer. v. 1
The number of virtual corporate meetings and trainings is on the increase. A school of thought believes that there are more benefits in arranging these meetings online while others have a contrary view. This essay will explain why virtual meetings more advantageous when compared to face to face engagements. Perhaps seen as the most important benefit of using the internet as a medium for organising meetings, is the flexibility attached. With increased globalisation, there is a need for people to carry out learning activities or meetings and most people have varied work patterns or live in different time zones which often make it difficult for face to face engagements to be arranged. However, with the use of internet facilities these meetings could be made possible. For example business executives residing in different continents could plan a meeting on the go with a minimal effect on their other activities. Besides, the availability of the internet has reduced the cost of doing business. Before now people would have to travel for most trainings and other business transactions, however with online infrastructures, the same could be held with little or no travel involved, thereby improving the bottom due to the low cost of conducting business related activities. Conversely, some people believe that there are some non-verbal communication that cannot be transmitted online. The inability to touch or express some salient emotional gestures via the internet makes face to face engagements preferable. Furthermore, online training may promote a measure of indiscipline as participants may not fully concentrate due to side attractions. In face to face meetings, this is not the same as the consciousness of having other colleagues and facilitators around can have a ripple effect on an individual. For example, during training, people are forced to do assignments when they see other colleagues doing theirs. In summary, the flexibility and low cost gained from using an online source for meetings and trainings, far outweigh the disadvantages. The inability to express some non-verbal cue and low concentration could actually be compensated for if adequate measures are put in place to curtail identified issues.
The number of virtual corporate
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meetings
and
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is on the increase. A school of
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thought
believes that there are more benefits in arranging these
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meetings
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online
while others have a contrary view. This essay will
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explain
why virtual
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meetings
more advantageous when compared to
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face
to
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face
engagements.

Perhaps
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seen
as the most
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important
benefit of using the internet as a medium for
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organising
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meetings
, is the flexibility attached. With increased
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globalisation
, there is a need for
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people
to carry out learning activities or
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meetings
and most
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people
have varied work patterns or
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live
in
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different
time zones which
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often
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make
it difficult for
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face
to
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face
engagements to
be arranged
.
However
, with the
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use
of internet facilities these
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meetings
could
be made
possible.
For example
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business
executives residing in
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different
continents could plan a
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meeting
on the
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go with
a minimal effect on their
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other
activities.
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, the availability of the internet has
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reduced
the cost of doing
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business
.
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Before
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now
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people
would
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have to
travel for most
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trainings
and
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other
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business
transactions,
however
with
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online
infrastructures, the same could
be held
with
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little
or no travel involved, thereby improving the bottom due to the low cost of conducting
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business
related activities.

Conversely
,
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some
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people
believe that there are
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some
non-verbal communication that cannot
be transmitted
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online
. The inability to touch or express
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some
salient emotional gestures via the internet
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makes
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face
to
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face
engagements preferable.
Furthermore
,
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online
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training
may promote a measure of indiscipline as participants may not
fully
concentrate due to side attractions. In
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face
to
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face
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meetings
, this is not the same as the consciousness of having
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other
colleagues and facilitators around can have a ripple effect on an individual.
For example
, during
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training
,
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people
are forced
to do assignments when they
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see
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other
colleagues doing theirs.

In summary, the flexibility and low cost gained from using an
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online
source for
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meetings
and
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trainings
, far outweigh the disadvantages. The inability to express
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some
non-verbal cue and low concentration could actually
be compensated
for if adequate measures
are put
in place to curtail identified issues.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Do you prefer to be a leading or supporting member in a group project? Give specific reasons and details in your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
349 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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