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Do you prefer going to the museum alone or with friends? Why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer

Do you prefer going to the museum alone or with friends? Why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer 0MyM3
Actually I prefer going to an art museum without friends because I know how it feels I'm alone. I can maintain my mind focused while I'm looking at astonishing paintings and I'd have the chance to travel in imagination for quite a long time and feel the deep-down sensation and the beauty beyond the painting. While with friends they would probably ask me to give an opinion about things while I just want to keep silent because I need to connect my spirit and soul with the artworks. Also, I'd need to talk to the painting, and if I do maybe I'd sound crazy to them. So going to an art museum alone is my perfect choice.
Actually I prefer going to an art museum without friends
because
I know how it feels I'm alone. I can maintain my mind focused while I'm looking at astonishing paintings and I'd have the chance to travel in imagination for quite a long time and feel the deep-down sensation and the beauty beyond the painting. While with friends they would
probably
ask me to give an opinion about things while I
just
want to
keep
silent
because
I need to connect my spirit and soul with the artworks.
Also
, I'd need to talk to the painting, and if I do maybe I'd sound crazy to them.
So
going to an art museum alone is my perfect choice.
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IELTS essay Do you prefer going to the museum alone or with friends? Why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer

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