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• do you prefer big shop or small shop ? why

• do you prefer big shop or small shop? why JLEe5
Looking to provide with necessities of life or merchandise that require careful evaluation as to quality and price, I will choose a big shop, Because it has carried a wide range of items of my focus. Big shops are always in the center and it's a global brand like Channel, Dior, Prada, Hermes, etc. These shops have items not only the clear origin but also were known by the whole world, in that the service is also better than the small shop. The business model is large, so it is easy to see in many popular places, Complain or anything is a little easier, clothes are often trendy or will update according to trends. Small shop service is not equal, not comfortable, few designs, less trendy than the big shop, but the price is cheap and comfortable with teenagers who can't have much money to buy expensive items. As a student in college, I still would like to choose the big shop because of not only the trends but also the quality.
Looking to provide with necessities of life or merchandise that require careful evaluation as to quality and price, I will choose a
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IELTS essay • do you prefer big shop or small shop? why

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