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Do you love food , what is the food you ate first time

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Of course I love Found because I am a food lover and I love to Punjabi food and I always eat this and other cousins like Chinese and Italianas well as Italian. I'm basically I am a food lover three years ago my father and I went to to his friend's house and their I first it South Indian food like idli dosa sambar and on that time I did not have a taste for this food because I do I did not really like this food but when I return my home in Punjab my mother also made at home this kind of food and I also so it in the few restaurants in Punjab then I like this food and now I really like this food and as well as its aroma and taste so it's a nice using but apart from that Punjabi cuisine is a best for me.
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and on that time I did not have a taste for this
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when I return my home in Punjab my mother
also
made at home this kind of
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and I
also
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it in the few restaurants in Punjab then I like this
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and
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now
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as its aroma and taste
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IELTS essay Do you love food, what is the food you ate first time

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
152 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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