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Process of brick making.

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The process by which bricks are manufactwed for the building industry can be outh First the raw material 35 in seven consecutive steps. -day, which has just below the surface of soil in certain day-rich areas has to be dug up by a Then the limps of clay are placed on a metal grid. in order to break up the large pare chunks of clay into much smaller ones, which fall through the metal grid roller, whose motion for the segregates the loits Sand and water are added to make a of day. homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds of cut into brick shaped preces by means of These fresh bricks are then lept in a drying oven. for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at The dried bricks kiln we then transferred to a so-called • another type of high temperature oven. First they are kupt at a moderate temperature of 200°C - 980°C, then high temperature of 870 °C- 1300°C. This process to followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 77 hours in Once a coding chambers. we bricks have bee cooled down and have become hard they get packaged and of delivered to their final destination, for example lap of trades be it a building site or storage.
The process by which
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bricks
are
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manufactwed
for the building

industry can be
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outh


First
the raw material

35 in

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seven
consecutive steps.

-day, which has
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just
below the

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surface
of soil in certain day-rich areas
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has to
be dug
up by a Then the limps of clay
are placed
on a metal grid.
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in
order to break up the large pare chunks of clay into much smaller ones, which fall through the metal grid roller, whose motion for the segregates the
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loits
Sand and water are
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added
to
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make
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a
of day.
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homogenous
mixture, which is then either formed in
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moulds
of
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cut
into
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brick
shaped
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preces
by means
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of


These fresh
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bricks
are then
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lept
in a drying oven.
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for
at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of
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bricks
at The dried
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bricks
kiln we then transferred to a
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so
-called • another type of high temperature oven.
First
they are
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kupt
at a moderate temperature of
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200°C
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-
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980°C
, then high temperature of 870 °C-
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1300°C
. This process to followed by cooling down the finished
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bricks
for 48 to 77 hours in Once a coding chambers.
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we
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bricks
have
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bee
cooled down and have become
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hard
they
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get
packaged and of delivered to their final destination,
for example
lap of trades be it a building site or storage.
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IELTS essay Process of brick making.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
227 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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