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Academy task two practicing

Academy task two practicing YgEXN

I can’t entirely agree that a person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. On the contrary, I discover that some values like honours, kindness and trust are beneficial in our modern communication. For example, those emotional issues always can invoke a big reaction from the crowd, even more, take place on social media. In Taiwan, people like to talk about the manner of taking transportation. They like to post the message that some people are good to give away their seats to the elderly with material items. Recently, a young woman even put a memo on her lap, writing, “please wake me up if you need a seat “, it gets many resources by people who take transportation to work every day. Because in average they have to take at least thirty minutes to travel from home to workplace. It had tremendous feedbacks and discussions according to this topic in Taiwan. However, I don’t think anything shall be too judgemental because I believe in the balance of difference virtue and individual material and status. It shall not discuss which side shall be better or worth but talk about the two sides of a coin. There can be flexible and creative on some occasions. For example, some people think material possession makes them motivated to work harder and achieve their material procession. Moreover, Also they believe higher social status can be more impactful than nobody. However, on the internet, the impact seems easier to be instead by social media tools.

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agree
 that a person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged
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social
 status and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 possessions. On the contrary
, I discover that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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honours
, kindness and trust are beneficial in our modern communication. For example
, those emotional issues always can invoke a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 reaction from the crowd, even more, take place on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 media.

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people
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some
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people
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good
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material
 items. Recently, a young woman even put a memo on her lap, writing, “This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
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gets
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many
 resources by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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Because
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have to
 take at least thirty minutes to travel from home to workplace. It had tremendous feedbacks and discussions according to this topic in Taiwan.

However
, I don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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judgemental
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because
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material
 and status. It shall not discuss which side shall be better or worth This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 talk about the two sides of a coin. There can be flexible and creative on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 occasions. For example
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 possession This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 them motivated to work harder and achieve their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 procession. Moreover
, Also
 they believe higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 status can be more impactful than nobody. However
, on the internet, the impact seems easier to be instead
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 media tools. 