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Consider the events leading up to the French Revolution, the Revolution itself, and its aftermath, particularly from the perspective of the characters. Is the French Revolution is justified?

Consider the events leading up to the French Revolution, the Revolution itself, and its aftermath, particularly from the perspective of the characters. Is the French Revolution is justified? xg6j9
In A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens, tensions are rising throughout the book between the Third Estate and the First and Second Estate. This eventually led up to the French Revolution, a ten-year struggle for power, where French commoners rose and challenged the monarchy in place. This was due to how poorly the Third Estate was treated, which made it seem as if revenge is necessary. Once the French Revolution breaks out, the revolutionaries go on a killing spree, as they start to lose their sight on what they are fighting for. Even though the violence of the revolutionaries escalated out of control and clouded their vision of righteousness, the French Revolution was ultimately justified because of how poorly and cruelly the 3rd Estate was being treated by the aristocracy. Though the revolutionaries committed various acts that were deemed immoral and unrighteous, the revolution is justified because of how awful the 1st and 2nd Estate treated the 3rd Estate before the Revolution. The revolutionaries may have committed immoral acts to the aristocracy because of their sight for revenge, like killing the prisoners in mass, but since the upper classes committed worse acts towards the 3rd Estate, the revolution is justified. In Chapter 7 of the second book, the Marquis gets angry after he does not get what he wants, so he orders his carriage to drive down the village roads fast, making people scramble for their lives. The carriage proceeds to turn a corner where a fountain is, and when doing so, “one of its wheels [comes] to a sickening jolt, and there [is] a loud cry from a number of voices, ” (Dickens 111). After the Marquis realizes he had just run over a child, he scolds the peasants for not taking care of themselves. This further justifies the revolt that stopped the cruel actions by the aristocracy from continuing. Furthermore, another action that was deemed cruel was that of Foulon, a member of the aristocracy who had faked his death. When tasked with the problem of starving commoners, Foulon proceeded to “[tell] the famished people that they [should] eat grass, ” (Dickens 219). This action caused an increase in tensions between the upper and lower class and was ultimately justified when Foulon was killed and beheaded by the revolutionaries, but the revolutionaries go a little overboard by shoving Foulon’s mouth with grass. Due to this, the 3rd Estate was seen as violent and out of control, losing sight of the righteousness they fought hard for; however, the revolution was justified because of Foulon’s actions towards the commoners. Additionally, the revolution was ultimately justified because the aristocracy thought they could solve all of their mishaps and problems by simply giving money for the unlawful acts committed against the poor; therefore causing tension between the aristocracy and the 3rd Estate over time. Whenever there was an issue with the 3rd Estate, the aristocracy thought and believed that they could easily solve the problem by throwing money at the commoners. Before Doctor Manette is imprisoned, he is taken in by the Evremonde brothers to help a woman, and when Doctor Manette realizes what they did to her and her family he is in shock. The next day, when Doctor Manette opens his door, a “‘rouleau of gold was left on [his] door in a little box, with [his] name on the outside, ’” (Dickens 327). The rouleau of gold on his doorstep was a bribe from the Evermonde brothers to keep Manette’s mouth shut, and when Manette eventually does tell the authorities, he is thrown in prison. This action further exemplifies that the revolution was justified, because of the 3rd Estate’s unfair treatment. Another example of the 3rd Estate’s maltreatment is when the Marquis throws a gold coin at the father after running over the child. In Chapter 7, just after the Marquis runs over Gaspard’s child and scolds the people, the Marquis thinks he can make up for the child’s loss by simply throwing a gold coin at the child’s father. The Marquis does not feel bad whatsoever, he just “[throws] out a gold coin for the valet to pick up” (Dickens 111), which causes Gaspard to seek revenge and go kill the Marquis. The killing of the child by the Marquis shows how the revolution was justified because commoners like Gaspard wanted revenge against the aristocracy for actions like this. The commoners were being treated as dogs instead of real people as they are being thrown “treats” for whenever the aristocracy does something to them that harms them. The throwing of the coin from the Marquis is an example of how the aristocracy uses their wealth to solve all of their problems; therefore causing the people to want to revolt because the aristocracy thought of the commoners as items, rather than real people. Though there are many reasons why the revolution is unjustified due to the clouded vision of the revolutionaries, there are more examples that prove that the revolution is justified. Over the course of the French Revolution, the revolutionaries lost sight of what they were aiming for, which was righteousness, and they instead sought to execute anyone who opposed the revolution. However, as the time before the revolution showed, the revolutionaries had some reason to be as crazed and blood-thirsty they were, because of their poor treatment. Since the 3rd Estate was treated so poorly, the commoners were forced to go crazy and hellish because of all of their built-up anger and suffering. Overall, the revolution is ultimately seen as justified because of the unjust treatment of the commoners due to the spoiled aristocrats.
In A Tale of Two Cities by Charles
Dickens
, tensions are rising throughout the book between the Third
Estate
and the
First
and Second
Estate
. This
eventually
led up to the French
Revolution
, a ten-year struggle for power, where French commoners rose and challenged the monarchy in place. This was
due
to how
poorly
the Third
Estate
was
treated
, which made it seem as if
revenge
is necessary. Once the French
Revolution
breaks out, the revolutionaries go on a killing spree, as they
start
to lose their
sight
on what they are fighting for.
Even though
the violence of the revolutionaries escalated out of control and clouded their vision of righteousness, the French
Revolution
was
ultimately
justified
because
of how
poorly
and
cruelly
the 3rd
Estate
was being
treated
by the aristocracy.

Though the revolutionaries
committed
various
acts
that
were deemed
immoral and unrighteous, the
revolution
is
justified
because
of how awful the 1st and 2nd
Estate
treated
the 3rd
Estate
before
the
Revolution
. The revolutionaries may have
committed
immoral
acts
to the
aristocracy
because
of their
sight
for
revenge
, like killing the prisoners in mass,
but
since the upper classes
committed
worse
acts
towards the 3rd
Estate
, the
revolution
is
justified
. In Chapter 7 of the second book, the Marquis
gets
angry after he
does
not
get
what he wants,
so
he orders his carriage to drive down the village roads
fast
, making
people
scramble for their
lives
. The carriage proceeds to turn a corner where a fountain is, and when doing
so
, “one of its wheels [
comes
] to a sickening jolt, and there [is] a loud cry from a number of voices,
(Dickens
111). After the Marquis realizes he had
just
run
over
a
child
, he scolds the peasants for not taking care of themselves. This
further
justifies the revolt that
stopped
the cruel actions by the
aristocracy
from continuing.
Furthermore
, another
action
that
was deemed
cruel was that of
Foulon
, a member of the
aristocracy
who had faked his death. When tasked with the
problem
of starving commoners,
Foulon
proceeded to “[
tell
] the famished
people
that they [should] eat grass,
(Dickens
219). This
action
caused an increase in tensions between the upper and lower
class
and was
ultimately
justified
when
Foulon
was killed
and beheaded by the revolutionaries,
but
the revolutionaries go a
little
overboard by shoving
Foulon
’s mouth with grass.
Due
to this, the 3rd
Estate
was
seen
as violent and out of control, losing
sight
of the righteousness they fought
hard
for;
however
, the
revolution
was
justified
because
of
Foulon
’s actions towards the commoners.

Additionally
, the
revolution
was
ultimately
justified
because
the
aristocracy
thought
they could solve all of their mishaps and
problems
by
simply
giving money for the unlawful
acts
committed
against the poor;
therefore
causing tension between the
aristocracy
and the 3rd
Estate
over
time. Whenever there was an issue with the 3rd
Estate
, the
aristocracy
thought
and believed that they could
easily
solve the
problem
by throwing money at the commoners.
Before
Doctor
Manette
is imprisoned
, he
is taken
in by the
Evremonde
brothers to
help
a woman, and when Doctor
Manette
realizes what they did to her and her family he is in shock. The
next
day, when Doctor
Manette
opens his door, a “‘
rouleau
of gold was
left
on [his] door in a
little
box, with [his] name on the outside, ’”
(Dickens
327). The
rouleau
of gold on his doorstep was a bribe from the
Evermonde
brothers to
keep
Manette
’s mouth shut, and when
Manette
eventually
does
tell
the authorities, he
is thrown
in prison. This
action
further
exemplifies that the
revolution
was
justified
,
because
of the 3rd
Estate’s
unfair treatment. Another example of the 3rd
Estate’s
maltreatment is when the Marquis throws a gold coin at the father after running
over
the
child
. In Chapter 7,
just
after the Marquis runs
over
Gaspard
’s
child
and scolds the
people
, the Marquis
thinks
he can
make
up for the
child’s
loss by
simply
throwing a gold coin at the
child’s
father. The Marquis
does
not feel
bad
whatsoever, he
just
“[throws] out a gold coin for the valet to pick up”
(Dickens
111), which causes
Gaspard
to seek
revenge
and go kill the Marquis. The killing of the
child
by the Marquis
shows
how the
revolution
was
justified
because
commoners like
Gaspard
wanted
revenge
against the
aristocracy
for actions like this.
The
commoners were being
treated
as dogs
instead
of real
people
as they are
being thrown
“treats” for whenever the
aristocracy
does
something to them that harms them.
The
throwing of the coin from the Marquis is an example of how the
aristocracy
uses
their wealth to solve all of their
problems
;
therefore
causing the
people
to want to revolt
because
the
aristocracy
thought
of the commoners as items,
rather
than real
people
.

Though there are
many
reasons why the
revolution
is unjustified
due
to the clouded vision of the revolutionaries, there are more examples that prove that the
revolution
is
justified
.
Over
the course of the French
Revolution
, the revolutionaries lost
sight
of what they were aiming for, which was righteousness, and they
instead
sought to execute anyone who opposed the
revolution
.
However
, as the time
before
the
revolution
showed
, the revolutionaries had
some
reason to be as crazed and blood-thirsty they were,
because
of their poor treatment. Since the 3rd
Estate
was
treated
so
poorly
, the commoners
were forced
to go crazy and hellish
because
of all of their built-up anger and suffering.
Overall
, the
revolution
is
ultimately
seen
as
justified
because
of the unjust treatment of the commoners
due
to the spoiled aristocrats.
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