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Do you like meeting new people

Do you like meeting new people pRjAy
I am keen on meeting new people. Due to the fact that it gives me a chance to learn new things and helps to broaden my horizon whileconversing with them. I am a teacher, so I frequently meet new people. They may be parents, other instructors, pupils and others. Some people's personality attracts me because of their good manner. Yet other people are extremely clumsy. I always try to know about their liking and disliking making friends with them.
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people
. Due to the fact that it gives me a chance to learn new things and
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helps
to broaden my horizon
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whileconversing
with them. I am a teacher,
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I
frequently
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meet
new
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people
. They may be parents, other instructors, pupils
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and others
.
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Some
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people
's personality attracts me
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because
of their
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good
manner.
Yet
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people
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extremely
clumsy. I always try to know about their liking and disliking making friends with them.
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IELTS essay Do you like meeting new people

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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