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Being a celebrity brings more problems than the benefits

Being a celebrity brings more problems than the benefits xmj1a

Surely any of us dreamed of becoming a celebrity. But have you ever thought about the advantages and the disadvantages of being a celebrity? And for me, being a celebrity brings more problems than the benefits! Firstly, being a celebrity can definitely brings lots of money, a well - paid and the better life for you. But besides, you can be very tired because of the number of work that you have to do. Not only that, if you have good reputation, it has a lots of annoying fans. They can disturb you wherever you are. Moreover, you couldn't have time with your family or maybe you salary will unstable. In conclusion, It is very difficult to become a famous people, so if you have the dream of becoming a celebrity, you must always consider it carefully.

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