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Do you like living in the country or in the city? Why?

Do you like living in the country or in the city? Why? Da797
In my opinion, I prefer living in the country to in the city for some reasons. Firstly, people in the countryside are friendly and hospitable; they will always welcome us or help us at any time. Secondly, life in the country is very peaceful and comfortable. We can enjoy the fresh air without worrying about environmental pollution from vehicles as much as when living in the city. The space is large. Children can enjoy running around without disturbing others. In addition, one of the most important advantages of being in the countryside is safety. There is very little crime or very little robbery happening. Finally, there're many activities that we can do in the country such as fishing in the river, flying kites and many other interesting things. To sum up, except for the income issue, the countryside is a better residence than the city.
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in the countryside are friendly and hospitable; they will always welcome us or
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us at any time.
Secondly
, life in the country is
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peaceful and comfortable. We can enjoy the fresh air without worrying about environmental pollution from vehicles as much as when living in the city. The space is large. Children can enjoy running around without disturbing others.
In addition
, one of the most
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advantages of being in the countryside is safety. There is
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very
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crime or
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very
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robbery happening.
Finally
, there're
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activities that we can do in the country such as fishing in the river, flying kites and
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many
other interesting things. To sum up,
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except for
the income issue, the countryside is a better residence than the city.

IELTS essay Do you like living in the country or in the city? Why?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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