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There are differing opinions on whether children should be required to do household tasks. Some people think that parents should do all the household tasks without their children's help, for they believe that children are still too young to do house work and can sometimes make things worse. Other people, however, argue that it is beneficial in many ways for children to take part in the household work. I, myself, agree with the latter. Children should be required to help with household tasks as it teaches children responsibility, discipline and contributes to a sense of unity. Background Information: There are differing opinions on whether children should be required to do household tasks. Some people think that parents should do all the household tasks without their children's help, for they believe that children are still too young to do house work and can sometimes make things worse. Other people, however, argue that it is beneficial in many ways for children to take part in the household work. Thesis Statement: Children should be required to help with household tasks as it teaches children responsibility, discipline and contributes to a sense of unity.
There are differing opinions on whether
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children
should be
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household
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Some
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people
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think
that parents should do all the
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household
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tasks
without their children's
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help
, for they believe that
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children
are
still
too young to do
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house
work and can
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sometimes
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make
things worse. Other
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people
,
however
, argue that it is beneficial in
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many
ways for
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children
to
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take part
in the
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household
work. I, myself,
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agree
with the latter.
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Children
should be
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required
to
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help
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
as it teaches
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children
responsibility, discipline and contributes to a sense of unity.

Background Information: There are differing opinions on whether
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
should be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
required
to do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that parents should do all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
without their children's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
, for they believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
are
still
too young to do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
work and can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
things worse. Other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
,
however
, argue that it is beneficial in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
work.

Thesis Statement:
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Children
should be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
required
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
as it teaches
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
responsibility, discipline and contributes to a sense of unity.
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Essay
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3 paragraphs
190 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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