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Do you choose theater or cinema?

Do you choose theater or cinema? QVmE1
I prefer cinema because I like fantastic and clear screen performances. I have never been to theater before, but even on TV, the theater scenes seem boring and out of tune, and in the movies, everything is amazing, everything is in place. Everyone says there is life in the theater, but I do not think so, it is true, everything in it is live, but neither the background on the stage nor background, in general, everything is not as clear and wonderful as in the movie, all the backgrounds in the movie seems real, even if drawn. Cinema has some kind of magic can convince a person of what is going on in it, and theater is not. My last though: I choose the cinema anyway.
I prefer cinema
because
I like fantastic and
clear
screen performances. I have never been to
theater
before
,
but
even on TV, the
theater
scenes seem boring and out of tune, and in the movies,
everything
is amazing,
everything
is in place. Everyone says there is life in the
theater
,
but
I do not
think
so
, it is true,
everything
in it is
live
,
but
neither the background on the stage nor background,
in general
,
everything
is not as
clear
and wonderful as in the movie, all the backgrounds in the movie seems real, even if drawn. Cinema has
some
kind of magic can convince a person of what is going on in it, and
theater
is not. My last though: I choose the cinema anyway.
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IELTS essay Do you choose theater or cinema?

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  American English
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