Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? why or why not?

Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? why or why not? WgybN
Nowadays, self-driving cars are becoming gradually popular and gaining a lot of advocates. Consequently, considering their advantages must not be so challenging. Almost 90 per cent of people in a society are autonomous car proponents except for a small group who criticize this new generation of vehicles. Critics believe that the algorithm used in programming these cars are not advanced enough to avoid dangers from car occupants. For instance, in rainy or snowy weather, autonomous car sensors are not able to distinguish hazardous points. As a result, the possibility of collision will increase remarkably. If I had a chance to predict whether this kind of new car will become common or not, I would confess that nothing is impossible. All over the world, a lot of engineers and scientists are investigating these new kinds of transportation. Due to scientific advances, the drawbacks of self-driving cars will remove easily, and they will be an important part of our lives.
Nowadays, self-driving
cars
are becoming
gradually
popular and gaining
a lot of
advocates.
Consequently
, considering their advantages
must
not be
so
challenging. Almost 90 per cent of
people
in a society are autonomous
car
proponents
except for
a
small
group who criticize this new generation of vehicles.

Critics believe that the algorithm
used
in programming these
cars
are not advanced
enough
to avoid
dangers
from
car
occupants.
For instance
, in rainy or snowy weather, autonomous
car
sensors are not able to distinguish hazardous points.
As a result
, the possibility of collision will increase
remarkably
.

If I had a chance to predict whether this kind of new
car
will become common or not, I would confess that nothing is impossible. All over the world,
a lot of
engineers and scientists are investigating these new kinds of transportation. Due to scientific advances, the drawbacks of self-driving
cars
will remove
easily
, and they will be an
important
part of our
lives
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? why or why not?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts