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do you believe money can buy happiness pXA22
Do you believe money can buy happiness for people Honestly spkeaking, I have to admit money can’t buy happiness for people. In fact, plenty of people have money and still aren’t happy. I think that money is not everything. I watched a video which made mention of “ with money, you can buy a house, but not a home. you can buy a clock, but not time. with money you can buy a bed, but not sleep. With money, you can buy a doctor, but not good health. With money you can buy insurance, but not safety ”. Well, I guess that to some extent, money is also as important as oxygen, we need it to live. It you through a lot of situaton. Money can provide security, comfort, and reducce a lot of worries in life. This proves that money can’t buy happiness for people. however, money contributes to happiess.
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IELTS essay do you believe money can buy happiness

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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