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Do you agree that they changed the Law? Why and why not?

Do you agree that they changed the Law? Why and why not? gGNL3
absolutley, I gree with law. because our children is very important to us. if I am a mom I want to my kids to eat and buy healthy food with out any problems. and some resturant they do not care about our kids health they only about their earnings. In this essay, the writer write a bout the new law in uk and explain how the government in uk put this law to help kids under 16 years to life healthy life with fit or any problems.
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to us. if I am a mom I want to my kids to eat and
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buy
healthy food
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with out
any problems.
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resturant
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uk
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how the
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kids under 16 years to life healthy life with fit or any problems.
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IELTS essay Do you agree that they changed the Law? Why and why not?

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